Mechanic Testing

Card Name A {1}{U}{B}
Sorcery
Draw 2 cards
Traumatize -- If a creature was sacrificed this turn, target player discards 2 cards instead.

Card Name B {2}{B}{R}
Sorcery
Choose 1-- Destroy target creature. It doesn't regenerate; or ~ deals 3 damage to target player.
Traumatize -- If a creature was sacrificed this turn, you may choose both instead of one.

Card Name C {R}{R}
Enchantment - Aura
Enchant Creature
Enchanted Creature has haste.
Traumatize -- When ~ attacks, destroy target artifact if a creature was sacrificed this turn.

It's good, although it's feels a bit like Morbid.

Although the flavour can be a bit weird. Why is it that something that can usually draw you two cards will suddenly make someone discard two cards if they're traumatized? I guess you could rationalize it with something like channeling the sacrificed creature's screams or something. Something like 'Words of Power' with some fitting flavour text should do it.

I like the second one though. It's really fun.

But I can't even attempt justifying flavour on the last one

Overall, it's a good show of your mechanic. I like it.

The First card should be a Sorcery.

The "Target creature has haste" is not worded right it should be "Enchanted Creature has haste".

Agreeing in that Mechanic feels iffy flavourwise.

.Rai wrote:It's good, although it's feels a bit like Morbid.

Although the flavour can be a bit weird. Why is it that something that can usually draw you two cards will suddenly make someone discard two cards if they're traumatized? I guess you could rationalize it with something like channeling the sacrificed creature's screams or something. Something like 'Words of Power' with some fitting flavour text should do it.

I like the second one though. It's really fun.

But I can't even attempt justifying flavour on the last one

Overall, it's a good show of your mechanic. I like it.

Don't justify, just let it go.
I was trying to test the ability of what it can do, and what is the extent of what I can do with it is.

-Griselbrand- wrote:The First card should be a Sorcery.

The "Target creature has haste" is not worded right it should be "Enchanted Creature has haste".

Agreeing in that Mechanic feels iffy flavourwise.

Flavor-wise, okay, I'll either change it or work more on the flavor idea.
And OCG is always a plus so you can learn the correct wording