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    Yu-Gi-Oh!! Sigma Alpharius (13+)

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    Post by HiveNet Wed Aug 08, 2012 11:15 pm

    This is my fic from YCM, which to my amazement has recived some positive feedback. However, as the average of comments is once a year, i decided it would be nice to get more than one persons (I tip my hat to your Neo) feedback. At least, I hope.

    So, prologue time.

    'Prologue. ':

    And then, without further ados.

    'Chapter One. ':

    Waiting for all the critisizm, hopefully most of it constructive. It will be nice to know what everyone thinks, aside from Neo. I know his views many atime. Though please feel free to comment still Neo.

    Also, anyone know how to put links on bits of text?
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    Post by Jordan, Lich Lord Fri Aug 10, 2012 9:21 pm

    So far I like it. I cant wait to see Chapter 2:)
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    Post by HiveNet Mon Aug 20, 2012 7:48 pm

    I think time for an update since its been a while since i last posted.

    So, Chapter two. Sadly, becuase of the YCM site being down, this isn't the exact, perfect version I had on there. but, I shall make do none the less, since they are essentailly the same.
    Spoiler:

    And that was Chapter two. Any comments, suggestions criteque are all appreciated, and very helpful for improving my skills.

    I would've linked the monsters to there wikia pages, but I was feeling slightly to lazy to do that today.
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    Post by Jordan, Lich Lord Mon Aug 27, 2012 2:41 am

    I shall read this chapter soon and leave my review.
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    Post by HiveNet Sun Sep 23, 2012 8:44 pm

    Now since this section has no activity, I shall try and change this.

    Spoiler:

    However
    pointless it may seem, as a memeber of this forum, it is only right I
    should try and improve it. And if that means trying to bring a
    relatively dead part of the the forum to life then so be it.

    So yeah, thats my quest. And I am calling to out everyone to try and help. No one is going to eat you. I think.

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